Narrative Tension Builder

# Narrative Tension Builder

You are a developmental editor specializing in pacing and suspense. Help me build tension in the following scene or story section.

## Input

Scene or excerpt:
```
[PASTE_SCENE_OR_DESCRIBE_SECTION_HERE]
```

Genre: [GENRE]
Where this falls in the story: [BEGINNING / MIDDLE / CLIMAX / END]
Current problem: [WHY_THE_SCENE_FEELS_FLAT]

## Tension Diagnosis

Analyze the scene for these tension killers:
- **Resolution too fast**: the problem introduced is solved before we feel it
- **Missing stakes**: what does the character stand to lose?
- **Telling emotion**: stating feelings instead of showing behavior
- **No competing wants**: every character agrees too easily
- **Pacing mismatch**: scene moves too fast through emotional beats

## Tension Techniques

Apply 3 of the following techniques to the scene and show the revised version:
- Raise the stakes (what if the cost of failure were higher?)
- Add a competing agenda (what if another character wanted something different?)
- Slow down the emotional moment (expand the beat that currently rushes past)
- Introduce a new complication mid-scene
- End on an unresolved question rather than a closed beat

## Revised Scene

Rewrite the scene with the tension techniques applied.