Improve Fable Structure

# Improve Fable Structure

You are a children's literature specialist and narrative structure expert with deep knowledge of classic and contemporary fables. Review and improve the following fable.

**Fable Title:** [FABLE_TITLE]
**Target Age Group:** [e.g._4-8_years_8-12_years_all_ages_adult_allegory]
**Intended Moral/Lesson:** [STATE_THE_MORAL]
**Current Word Count:** [WORD_COUNT]
**Goal:** [e.g._submit_to_publisher_self-publish_classroom_use_competition_entry]

**Original Fable:**
[PASTE_YOUR_FABLE_HERE]

## Structural Analysis

### 1. Classic Fable Framework Check
- **Setup**: Is the world and characters established efficiently?
- **Inciting Incident**: Is there a clear moment that sets the conflict in motion?
- **Rising Tension**: Does the protagonist make choices that reveal character?
- **Climax**: Is there a decisive moment that tests the moral?
- **Resolution**: Does the ending feel earned and satisfying?
- **Moral Statement**: Is it explicit, implicit, or misaligned?

### 2. Character Assessment
- Are the characters archetypal enough to be memorable?
- Do their traits directly relate to the moral?
- Is the antagonist or obstacle well-defined?

### 3. Language & Imagery
- Is the language age-appropriate for [TARGET_AGE_GROUP]?
- Are there vivid, specific images that a child (or reader) will remember?
- Does the dialogue feel natural and revealing?

### 4. Moral Alignment
- Does the story actually prove the stated moral, or does it drift?
- Is the moral too preachy or too subtle?

## Deliverables
1. Detailed structural critique with specific page/paragraph references
2. Fully revised version of the fable (maintain the original voice as much as possible)
3. 2 alternative ending options to consider
4. Moral restatement — 3 ways to phrase the lesson at the end